Catherine's work

Sophie's reviews

• [x] OK / I removed the 3 minutes video in the header to see what it looks like without as we said we don't want to keep it. [] Let's make one
• [x] OK / I would rather put the whole title in Bold "Welcome to Ğ1 currency, the world’s first ethical currency!" (maybe mix it with the title in the orange section "Let's Build a parallel economy" but I like that the parallel economy is highlighted too - what do you think?)
  • [x] Let's build a parallel Economy with G1 currency! on everypage. Welcome to G1
• [x] OK/ We can remove the 3 first pictures (when we talk about the bitcoin, centralized systems...) and put this as a text together otherwise it feels a little weird to see a text talking about bitcoin or centralized system and have to look further to see how the sentence is related to G1. and maybe we could have the future video on the left of that text/paragraph ?
  • [x] OK + popup on words (debt, blockchain...)
• [x] OK / I am not a big fan of parenthesis and as it make my eyes stumble. Maybe we could find a more flowy way of writting the sentence : "Libre or Free as in Freedom, Ğ1 currency drives sustainability & creation of value for all", same in the intro paragraph ? - [x] put a pop up "free" with "think Freedom!" and on on Libre Currency with small definition + button anchored in the page. Remove brakets. - [x] OK/ I would remove the **Learn More link just below the orange box ** as it leads nowhere for now. big button below the 7 arguments to the basics page - [] We could remove the pictures in front of the 7 themes as we could find someone to make some better designs for us. Also I tested another layout, I added a paragraph below the 7 points to show you what it would look like as blog posts (I can't choos the text color but it is more similar and aligned between each paragraph). - [] I think it would be best to not have** bold / underlining as it makes it harder to read**. Just my opinion, Idk what you prefer or Colm ? **i agree. definitely don't think need bold, underline and italic, in the economic** - [x] Link the Debt in the second paragraph to the basics Content : - [x] OK/ I don't know about mentioning Stephane Laborde all at first as G1 is not supposed to be personified and here we put him first. But I love the rest of the sentence. => [x] Put a small page with "based on ... " and link to relative theory of money - [x] OK/Sentence in the orange box "Free (libre) as in "freedom", Ğ1 currency drives sustainability & creation of value for all" : we could put something that introduces the 7 paragraphs so that we could use the same way to entitle these paragraphs ? Like "why an other currency ?" or "why a new currency ?" or "How different is G1 currency from other currencies ?" or "Why is G1 currency so awesome?" and then the answers would be each of the 7 paragraphs starting with the same phrase construction (a subject and verb of what the G1 is - cf below). - I like the 4 themes they show on the French homepage https://monnaie-libre.fr/ : - Environment : why is it environmental friendly - Democratie : why is it more democratic than other currencies - Crypto monnaies : why is it more fair than other cryptocurrencies - Local currencies : why is it different/better than local currencies because that's some of the first questions people ask depending where they are coming from. I can see that in your 7 points that maybe we could express these ideas : * [x] Decentralize - Share power and responsability -> The power structure is democratic and decentralized (2) (I am not sure if it is a good idea to use the **word Democratic as it is a screwed reference these days.**..) * [x] Create an economy where everyone takes part -> It's fair for Future Generations (6) I would echange the text that is on the intro page vs the pop up page "Each generation creates the money it uses without impacting future generations. The young are no longer disadvantaged in wealth creation." because it is less technical and easy to understand for those who come on the intro page. * [x] Co-create G1 currency every day -> Money is co-created by people, not by debt (3) I would put "called the "universal dividend" or "UDjust in the first sentence of that paragraph so we can remove the sentence "This small daily amount is called the "universal dividend" or "UD"."

• [x] We need to change the order of the "how it works" section (we did it in the page Getting Started but not in the Intro page) and maybe put some buttons or links to access the good pages ?

• [x] How do you feel about keeping the map in French (doesn't exist yet in English) ? And the text for the events ? Maybe there are better things to show there than what I wrote long time ago, idk..

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